dilluns, 17 de febrer del 2020
Opinion Essay - Ivan Balanza
divendres, 14 de febrer del 2020
OPINION ESSAY- VIOLENCE ON TV
Nowadays we frequently use our new technology to hang around or kill time, and one of this devices is the TV. It can be used to learn, inform or either entertain. But it can be a bad way of education for our kids or teens, because they can't see all what happens, as violence or murdering.
From my point of view, the extensive viewing of television violence by children causes greater aggressiveness. Sometimes, watching a single violent program can increase a lot. Children who view shows in which violence is very realistic and frequently repeated, are more likely to imitate what they see. Basically because in that age, kids and teens, are very susceptible to what they see and it can define which kind of decisions they will take in the future, thanks to the things they saw and learnt in that age.
Another reason I consider important to bear in mind is the fact that if teens see violence at TV, their empathy and sensitivity will decrease and even disappear, because they will be accustomed to see it and they won't feel any kind of respect or condelence to the others.
In conclusion, it's a good way to grow up and learn watching TV, but everything in good mesure, that's why parents must controlate what teens see, for their good education and for their future. They will see violence and unfair scenes when they be olders, but they shouldn't during their formation, to don't confuse ideas.
dimarts, 11 de febrer del 2020
OPINION ESSAY - Ignasi Blanes
Opinion Essay - Violence on TV
Nowadays, teenagers
spend much time watching the TV, where
I believe there is a wide range of violent content. But does violence increases
among teenagers when it is shown on TV?
On the one hand, I think that if
a kid grow up watching violence in their enviorenment, either at his family or through
a screen, he will normalize some violent reactions and behaviours. In addition, I believe that teens who are used to see violence on TV, grow
up being more aggressive and less empathic than those who are not used to it.
On the other
hand, I think that if we don’t try to make disappear violence which is on TV, we will have several problems
as a society in a near future.
To sum up, I
reckon that if television banned some explicit violent contents, the level
of violence in some kids and teenagers would decrease considerably and we
would prevent many behaviour problems.
OPNION ESSAY - Jordi Rojas
OPINION ESSAY
Childhood and youth are two moments of the human life, where the person is exposed to a lot of external influences.
Nowadays the cause of the violence at this ages, is often related with the influences of TV shows, videogames, movies, etc.
In my opinion, the violence in society is increasing nowadays because of the poor censure of the violent images in social media, videogames, etc. which is causing a change in our personalitys and in our lives. With this content some teenagers can interpret some violent attitudes as good attitudes. If this content were censored, we could preserve a more polite language and attitude respect others.
This violent attitudes can be: bullying, physical damage, cyberbullying,etc. wich usualy end in a punishment, harrasment, etc.
To sum up, I believe that if people were concient of the damage caused by watching violent scenes, this situation might change.
OPINION ESSAY - MARCOS LÓPEZ
Violence in TV
Is frequent to say the violence we see in television make us more violent. But, is true this affirmation?
Personally, I believe people who watch this type of series or movies, knows perfectly that what they are watching is unreal, and is only a simulation. Further, nowadays all programs have a recommended age. This is to can imagine what tone is going to have the program, and to can decide if you want to live this experience.
Will you go to the cinema with a kid to watch a movie recommended only to adults? Is obvious: no, because this can have violent or sexual scenes. Will you go to the cinema with a person with mental disorders to watch a violent movie? Also, no. That movie is not suitable for him or her, because in his mind, that can think the scenes seen in the movies are normal, this can alter his way of thinking,
In conclusion, I think that violent movies don’t make people more violent. The people can or can’t to be violent, but their way to act won’t change depending to the movies they watch.
OPINION ESSAY- ISMAEL OULAD-SIDI
VIOLENCE IN TV
Nowadays, the violence is around the world, wherever you go, you will see violence. I think thath it is because for the people, the violence is the fastest and easiest way to solve problems. But the police and the laws try to resolve this violence with fines, prision sentences etc..
The other problem is that violence appears on television, I think that the fact that violence appears on television makes it more interesting the programme, causing more audience and thus more profits.
All in all I think it is good that violence appears on television because for me seems to me very entertaining, it is already known that this is pure fiction and that because even if you see it in a video game, movie, this is not going to be real.
In conclusion, I think that those who are most in danger of harming their minds are children, since it's the little ones who try to imitate how fight their favorite characterssince since we were very young we have all tried to fight or be like the characters we like, for example, when I was little I tried to be a Transformer.
black mirror mario valero (Hubo un fallo al subirlo)
Inglish
This is a review of an episode
of “Black Mirror” called “Nosedive”. It’s a film of science fiction directed by
Joe Wright.
Lucy is a girl of the future,
and in this fiction future people is ranked not for his money or studies, the
people is ranked for his punctuation in a social media common for all the
humans.
Trying to improve his
punctuations she posts a picture about an old toy that she has with an old
friend who have grate notes. The old friend invites Lucy to his marriage but
only for convenience.
Lucy have some problems and
lose a lot of ranking. Finally, she gets tired of the systems and start to do
all that he wants.
opinion essay mario valero
English
Violence in TV
Nowadays, the violence is more and more common in TV programs for
teenagers. That, maybe, is making more violent the teenagers. The question is
if it is true or false.
In my opinion the violence is only a form to do more interesting and
exciting a programme. The teens are enough smarts to difference the reality and
the fiction. For example, any teenager is trying to cut down trees with his
hands after play Minecraft?
Furthermore, I believe that is possible that we can take ideas of the
TV, the young kids are always fighting like in his favourite cartoon or movie.
When I was a child, I were always playing with the Darth Vader laser sword.
All in all, I think the freedom to see what we want is essential.
Moreover, the teenagers are more intelligent than the people think.
OPINION ESSAY- Xavi Cumella
OPINION ESSAY
There is a dilemma that everybody around the world has: if programs don't encourage violence, would reduce it?
A part of the sector affirms it, it's demonstrated statistically.
Children are in the process of acquiring influences from other examples and it is very important to educate them in the best way.
Personally I consider priority education to other knowledge, sciences, history... Because that would significantly reduce the criminality of a society.
In conclusion, if government would reduce violence emited in TV programmes by a censure or some filter, it would improve the society.
There is a dilemma that everybody around the world has: if programs don't encourage violence, would reduce it?
A part of the sector affirms it, it's demonstrated statistically.
Children are in the process of acquiring influences from other examples and it is very important to educate them in the best way.
Personally I consider priority education to other knowledge, sciences, history... Because that would significantly reduce the criminality of a society.
In conclusion, if government would reduce violence emited in TV programmes by a censure or some filter, it would improve the society.
Opinion Essay - Alejandro de la Dehesa Copa
Some people believe that violence in society, specially among teenagers, increases when more violence is shown on television whereas there are others who hold a different point of view and think that is not true. I am totally with the people who disagrees that.
Personally, I believe that we live in a society where we tend to exaggerate things and that is the clear example of that. TV’s usually omit broadcasting series and shows that include violence before night, when kids go to sleep. If children or teenagers were ordered to go to bed by their parents, they would not be able to see that kind of programs.
Furthermore, from my point of view TV nowadays does not have such a big impact on teenagers as videogames for example. Teeenagers tend to play and watch on youtube videos about video games which the main goal is to kill to people. If parents controlled the video games that their children play, the violence in our society would decrease.
In conclusion, I find it comprensible that adults believe that TV influences in the way that teenagers behave, but nowadays teenagers are more keen on other things that influence them more. If society was more informed, they would not make false affirmations.
OPINION ESSAY – MARTÍ PINELL
It is true that violence in society, specially among teenagers, is increasing due to all shows, movies or video games that teenagers watch or play every day? As a teenager, I think the violence that is shown in television can be harmful.
As I see it, if most kids grow up watching violence in TV, they will use violence as a way to solve their problems in the future. So, in my opinion, I think that parents should supervise which shows, movies or video games are their children watching or playing, until they've grown enough to know what shows they should watch and which they shouldn’t.
In my view, if kids grow up watching not violent content, they won’t have a violent behaviour, and they will understand the violence that is shown in shows, movies or video games are not an example to follow and it is just made for entertainment.
Opinion Essay- Bernat
Opinion Essay
Violence in society, especially among teenagers, increases when more violence is shown on television.
In my personal opinion, violence in society is present and real. You can see it almost everywhere like in schools, in streets also in some families.
In my point of view, there is a passive violence in teenagers that is because of the inputs that their receive from external things. For example, at present, most of the videogames at the market are violent videogames, or are based on a type of videogame that improve the feeling to use violence. Moreover the most watched film genre is the action and that is the one of the violent genre in the cinema and this generate aid that pass this.
For all this reasons I’m agree with the opinion about that the violence or the feeling of violence increases when it shows on TV or in other platforms.
OPINION ESSAY - Daniel Piqué
OPINION ESSAY
Studies show that television is such a powerful influence in the development of teenage behaviour and their related moral principles.
Nowadays, it is generally agreed that teenagers have absolute access to several TV programmes that maybe aren’t the most appropriate to their ages. Personally, I strongly believe that the current fighting behaviour which teenagers have may be caused because of the contact they have with the shows on the TV schedule. For instance, we just need to take a look at the USA and their endless scenarios of weapon-carrying in schools.
Furthermore, I think that the number of teenagers who misbehave is increasing with no limit. One consequence of this could be that they are becoming insensitive and uncaring. Unless the content shown on TV changes, the situation won’t improve, causing a detrimental effect on youngsters.
To sum up, it is clear to me that the larger part of the young population wouldn’t have this problem if these programmes didn’t exist.
OPINION ESSAY - Roger Bustos
OPINION ESSAY
There is a problem that it’s known
around the world, a big conflict, which is, do you think that if on the TV the
programs shows less violence, it will be less violence in teenagers.
From one part we have that’s
true, because every day on television shows a lot of programs of fights and a
lot of action movies, and a part of this on the news bulletin they are talking
always about bad news, like murders, robberies..
From the other part if the TV
programs affect at our life, the world will be an horrible place, and well, is
it, but not at all, so, it have no sense that, what people see at TV, because,
maybe in TV you can watch people who help the other and you don’t do it.
All in all, in my opinion you
need to be a person with zero personality, because you have to control your own
personality, and not depend on what the others do, so and also you have to
control your impulse.
OPINION ESSAY – Mireia Viladot
OPINION ESSAY – Mireia Viladot
Childhood and youth are the two moments of the human development where the human is especially exposed to external influences. Nowadays, exposure to TV shows, movies, video games, music or music clips and online content with violent scenes is often identified as the cause of violence involving youth.
Personally, I think that the violence in society, especially among teenagers, increases when shown in social media, which it’s becoming a very controversial and troubling issue. In my opinion, the exposure to violent scenes in the social media is changing our way to express and communicate; if those were censored, we could preserve a more polite language and attitude respect others.
In addition, if you see violent scenes, you may have the intention to cause physical or mental harm, which usually ends in harassment: bullying, cyberbullying...
To sum up, I believe that if people were aware of the damage caused by watching violent scenes, this situation might change.
Opinion Essay - Kelun Chen
Violence among teenagers
Nowadays TV series and videogames are the main joyful tools among teenagers. However, a great number of teenagers who enjoy playing videogames or watching TV series are not the type of cuddling kids we had imagined.
In my opinion, those kids are invaded by violent series and videogames. Nevertheless, the affection of those joyful things is not always effective on kids with a great mentality and education. Those who rarely get invaded by rage and violence are naturally aggressive kids.
Furthermore, in my opinion, if parents had educated well their kids, they would not have been violent indeed. For instance, playing shooter games will not provide a child the knowledge you actually need to aim a real gun. In addition, if children had learned to aim a real weapon, the world would not be so peaceful.
To conclude, in my point of view, kids who really had a tough childhood are more likely to show an aggressive way of behaving while doing this kind of activity.
OPINION ESSAY - OSCAR GALLARDO
Many people
think that more and more the television shows more violence and crimes which has
become in a dangerous thing for young people, in many channels comes out
violence and nowadays the action films have become very famous and, in these
films, take place more violence.
Personally,
I think that the films can desensitize children of things that in real life are
serious and grave. In addition, if you let children see violence, they will be
more aggressive.
Studies
show that violence in television which the childrens can become immune to the
horror of violence and gradually accept violence to solve problems. If the
parents don't warn them that the things that they see are dangerous, they will
hurt someone.
Furthermore,
in my opinion in TV shows a lot of bad things and almost always just shows the
bad part and make you feel sad. Some channels sometimes they are not sincere
and can tell a lie. According to studies, the Fake News extend its influence.
In general,
I think that all of us must be careful that the things we see in TV. The TV
programs which young see it can influence them badly and we should put a limit
on watching television.
Opinion Essay - David Díaz
Opinion Essay
Nowadays, the television is one of the most popular media. Almost everyone has one at home, where you can watch all kinds of series, shows, films, news, and so on. There is no doubt that the most watched on television are series and movies, and a large part of their public are teenagers.
But the question is: Do series and movies increase violence among teenagers?
In my opinion, if you are under 18, you can’t watch violence scenes, because you can reproduce them at school and hurt your classmates. But I think that if your parents let you watch this kind of series and movies, they are responsible for the violence you can cause.
However, I think that not only television increases violence among teenagers. Also videogames can cause this, because there are many of them that are very violent and can’t be bought by people who are under 18. So I like the rules of videogames and they are that if a teenager wants to buy a game, he can’t buy it without an adult consent.
In conclusion: A lot of series, movies and videogames increase violence among teenagers, but if their parents let them watch this kind of series and movies and play this kind of videogames that are not for their age, they are responsible for the violence that teenagers can cause.
OPINION-ESSAY-Leo-Alòs-Grcic
Hi,
Today I will be talking briefly about a polemic term that has been running for quite a long time between the parents, it is about the idea that has some people that if someone sees violence they become violent doesn't matter if it´s on video games or tv they will experience a violent behavior. Well scientifically talking its strange cause it's the opposite, people that watch violence don't have any changes in the parts of the brain that provokes violent behaviors. In my opinion, if someone commits a crime or anything damaging for the society the tv violence didn't create or influence that, if someone is going through hard times and has bad social activity may create that violence but watching it on tv won't influence the mental stability of the person, even if he didn´t watch the violence on tv he would have done the same.
Today I will be talking briefly about a polemic term that has been running for quite a long time between the parents, it is about the idea that has some people that if someone sees violence they become violent doesn't matter if it´s on video games or tv they will experience a violent behavior. Well scientifically talking its strange cause it's the opposite, people that watch violence don't have any changes in the parts of the brain that provokes violent behaviors. In my opinion, if someone commits a crime or anything damaging for the society the tv violence didn't create or influence that, if someone is going through hard times and has bad social activity may create that violence but watching it on tv won't influence the mental stability of the person, even if he didn´t watch the violence on tv he would have done the same.
Opinion-Essay/Nil Puente
Nowadays,it's beacoming more and more common the opinion that the violence in society,specially among teenagers increases when more violence is shown on television.However,the question we need to answer is,it's that true?
Personally,I have seen violence in the televison since I was eight years,I start streaming the World Wrestling Entertaiment,and for me,the violence no increases beacouse of the violence shown on television.For example I can see two mens in a ring fighting each other,but If I thing about it,I know that they are doing a show, and I'm not going to do the same.
Furthermore,in my opinion if you show violence to the kids and you educate the kids showing they that it's a bad thing and you don't have never to use the violence,the kids will know what the violence is and they wont do it,beacouse they learn that the violence it's bad and they don't have to use it.
In general, I thing that the violence can be shown on the television but always like a bad thing and trying to teach that you don't have to use it.
Personally,I have seen violence in the televison since I was eight years,I start streaming the World Wrestling Entertaiment,and for me,the violence no increases beacouse of the violence shown on television.For example I can see two mens in a ring fighting each other,but If I thing about it,I know that they are doing a show, and I'm not going to do the same.
Furthermore,in my opinion if you show violence to the kids and you educate the kids showing they that it's a bad thing and you don't have never to use the violence,the kids will know what the violence is and they wont do it,beacouse they learn that the violence it's bad and they don't have to use it.
In general, I thing that the violence can be shown on the television but always like a bad thing and trying to teach that you don't have to use it.
dilluns, 10 de febrer del 2020
Opinion Essay - Albert Betorz
Some people says that if
teenagers watch violence on TV, the violence in society increases. This is a
topic that has been much discussed over time.
I think that the people
that says that, are who want to find an easy justification to this violence, or
they want to criticize some TV programs.
But in opinion if the teenagers
have a good education at home, this topic doesn’t affect them, but if it is the
opposite, then I think that this topic can affect a little in the violence in
the society.
Overall, I think that
this is not a problem for our society and we have to find solutions for this
problem, and stop blaming TV for these acts.
Opinion Essay - Marina Díaz
Does the violence shown on television affect violence in society, especially among teenagers? This topic is very commented by many people and has generated different opinions.
As I see it, if kids grow up watching violence in TV, they will imitate that violence. So, in my opinion, there is a parental responsibility to have some control over what kids see on television.
Furthermore, if kids see much violence on TV, they will become insensitive to the horror of violence. There are studies supporting these ideas and talking about more negative consequences that entails the exhibition of that violence.
All in all, in my opinion we have to look out what kids see to avoid the possible consequences of seeing excessively aggressiveness or violent behavior on TV.
dissabte, 8 de febrer del 2020
Opinion Essay- Pedro González Navarro
Opinion Essay: Violence among teenagers increases
when more violence is shown on television?
If teenagers saw violent content in TV, would his behavior change? This topic has been around the heads of many people, but I have a clear opinion on it.
The teenagers don’t get more violent for watching violent content, is the person himself who, according to his way of being, can become more aggressive. A calm and respectful person cannot become aggressive suddenly; on the other hand, a person who is already violent, only finds other ways of being violent.
In fact, the teen didn't become violent by the TV, normally is the people and the place that conditions him or her. Instead of blaming television, parents or legal guardians should know how to educate them.
In conclusion, if teenagers had a better education, they wouldn’t have any kind of violent impulses and, when they would see something violent on television, they would understand that it’s fictional.
Pedro González Navarro
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